When we presented are rough cut, music video to the class the feedback we received was that the pace of our video was good, and they liked the idea of our rewind when the girls are in the park. They also liked the close up of the leaves as it showed different shot types. The class enjoy the bit in the beginning when the two girls turn around together, but they thought we could have followed this through when they walked off as they didn’t really walk off at the same pace.
We did receive a few negatives from the class the biggest one was that there was a lot of long gaps but we will work on this as we are to finish filming by the end of the week. Due to the gaps in the music video they thought the narrative wasn’t clear, which meant that they thought it wasn’t looking like a music video because we still needed to include the lip-syncing, and they thought there was a couple of areas where the pacing could have been better, but we are to improve all these negatives as soon as we have all our footage.
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