When we presented are horror film animatic to the class the feedback that we receive was that we should make are opening a lot shorter as it was too long and we do have a time limit, also that we should have more different types of shots and maybe a bit more sounds within the story.
I think personally that we needed to improve our animatic a lot becasue we couldn't of had some of the shots from different angles instead of the same one, also i think the sounds were good at the right time but the use of i a bit more would og been good anfd i think a bit more interesting for people to watch. I also think the story could of be a bit more clear for people to understand and more shots could of been add to show that it is actually a horro film not just a school drama.
Also although we added information on the back about it i think a few more lines should of been filled in so the story is fully clear to understand.
I also think that because it was too long we have now taken it on board and have cut down on how long it is, also we did add more interesting shots and when filming we will be filming from different angles instead of just the same one, to make the audience intereseted and drawn in. we have add more sounds to are film so that it is not just boring talking throught out.
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